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"Candied"
A LiquidFire and XPERIENCE Collaboration


  LiquidFire:

Solidified
Cottony
Soft candy
Land on your head

Any and every where
Pristine blue shards
Tumble
Stabbing the soft ground

The
Sky
is
Falling

Spilling over the edge
Licorice strands
Coat
And
Snuff

Illuminous balls of sugar
Chase
Daring you to taste
'Lick me' it screams

You

Crawling under rocks
Behind buildings
Driving fast
Going no where

The whole world is flipping
Caving in
Swallowing itself
Whole

  XPERIENCE:

Tempting Toffee
Taffy Tickling
Taste buds

"Who Can Make A Sunrise, Tickle It With Dew"

The Candy Man Can....

Craves of Sugary Candy
This Concentrated Solution
Causing
Cavities
Creating Screaming Agony
On

Sweet Teeth

Broiling Sugary Brown
Until Liquefied
Caramels
Melting Moons

Melodically Meshing

Marshmallows In The Form of Glazed Clouds
Covering Chocolate Skies

With No Where To Hide

Ice Pops and Gum Drops
Lusting Licorice
and Life in the Form of
Lackadaisical Lollipops

You

Enjoy This Abundance of
Candied Dreams...

Over Indulging in the Sweetness
Tastefully Tumbling from Syrupy Skies
Neglectful

That If You Arent Careful
Your Teeth Will Become

Rotten!
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Date Submitted: Nov 10, 2008 (06:36 PM)
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  Beautiful Soul
11/23/08 (11:47 AM) 
What I absolutely adore about this piece is what I love about abstract writing...it can mean whatever i want it to mean and my mind did wander with this one... well done

  Jody
11/13/08 (07:32 PM) 
I was with you up until you had to bring the dentist in this.... lol, yeah I'm still afraid of the dentist! lol, I'm a big baby I know... lol, I was so nervous one time I stole the fuckin bib... lol, came home like wtf is this on my neck? lol, parting gift... lol, goodtimes but I like candy and I like nature, so the two 'gether is love! lol, very nice work off each other.

  iva
11/11/08 (09:58 PM) 
perfect combo the two of you flow like one .

  LadyMay16
11/11/08 (03:23 PM) 
Sweet....lol

  Saunsia
11/11/08 (09:56 AM) 
see man...two of my abosolute favorite poets bringin the heat once agian... ya'll be doin the damn thing...way to bring it in fire...woulda been alittle nicer if it was a little longer...but xperience you ended wit some dope as shit... but yall did the damn thing...10***** keep it up my nigs! o and return the love....one!

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