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"Can you stand the rain (we have to endure)"
  by b-y


I Can Make It Through The Rain - Mariah Carey





My.....souless, empty, castrated, depleted body is walking in this heavy rain
As my mind wonders of how much of this pain I can obtain
No way to explain this state of emotion and if pain is the notion
then my mind and body is exploding, gotta stop reading Newton's Law of motion
Where do I go from here?
Who the hell can I run to in this time of need?
No one can help me in this life I lead, I got to make it on my own
The combat zone did not prepare me for this shit
Maybe I should quit...that would make everyone happy, even my enemies
My eyes are red, but i haven't been smoking
Drenched...soaked....drained in this life....
I campaigned for love and I got elected for another heartbreak
I partake this action with millions in the world standing in the rain
Trying to explain how they are going to maintain dealing with
Painful love
Stress
Finances
Heartbreaks
But .............................
We have to pull through this jagged edge in life when shit gets rough
Even when you lose the important person in your life...
We must fight....
We must stand....
We must understand that...
Even we are outmanned by the odds
We have the upperhand and not letting things get out of hand
Run through the rain and shelter yourself
We...........can not.........give up
We...........can not.........give in
We...........must stay strong for the people for the people who care
The people who love you for you
and believe you mean the world to them
Regardless of the hard hits you take from the rain
We fall down and we get up swinging
If you feel as life happens to be too much....
get on your knees in the rain....and pray
Can you stand the rain??? Are you listening?
Can you stand the rain? Let me ask one more time...
We must endure and overcome.....CAN YOU STAND THE RAIN???


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Date Submitted: Nov 15, 2008 (02:45 PM)
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  BxGrL
11/16/08 (10:40 AM) 
i love this scribe..............so much emotions that are given here........you really out did yourself on this one.... its def a fav and 10*

  BellaMami
11/15/08 (02:50 PM) 
i will keep this close by me...as a reminder...everytime im tired of fighting, struggling...i will let your words nurture my ailing spirit...i thank you deeply for this.

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