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"Can you see the god in me?"
  by ok


Can u see the god in me?
The desire to be loved
These three heart birthmarks
Tell the story of my art
Im a lover deeply involved in my calling
The offspring shedding love unto this world is spawning
Can u see the god in me
The desire to love u too
The ability to look beyond your possibilities
And love you into your truth
Can you see the god in me?
The woman that yearns to be more
To accomplish above and beyond all personal goals
So I can help the next generation soar
To highest heights and greater riches
To shut down lies and succeed beyond inner wishes
Do you see the god in me
Or will you ignore it completely
Brush it off and assume without truly knowing me
Just like god
Do you know my heart
Or are these random scribed thoughts
Im not down talking anyone
or taking any cheap shots
If you think you got all the answers
answer this question ive got
Can you see the god in me?


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Date Submitted: Oct 02, 2008 (02:14 AM)
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  StraY12
12/16/08 (09:12 PM) 
This was very nice, I'm feelin' your style fo'real now, makes me want to do a piece just like this, I'm liking it! you did your thing on everything I've read up to this point, it shows your versatility and skills, keep doin' you! peace!

  cece_brown
11/21/08 (11:59 PM) 
this iz soo great, i had to read it 3 tymes i loved it !!!

  williesidney
11/09/08 (01:36 PM) 
That's a all right write God can use you if you only let him because he has given you a special gift of words and if you bless others with that God will take you places were you have never been keep on wriitng a big ten stars.

  poetrys poet
10/07/08 (08:41 PM) 
wow i have ta fav dis write fareal fareal man dis was hella smoove what meaning u put in the write

  the struggle
10/07/08 (08:29 PM) 
Very well done. To me, this speaks of the God in you, rather in all of us, that longs to help others, to leave some sort of imprint for the better. Truly honorable ambitions queen, I pray you complete all you set out to do. Much love.

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