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"can you love me like this"
  by H.H. Holloway


(will you teach a
ghost to live
livelier than a virus)

asks
he
asking
she
when
(asking thus
to ask
only to ask
once more)asking
essential: excus
-e(s&)
(qu_stion)s
in
the
night

(can you love
a man with scars
like treasure maps)

asking
him
asking
her
thus to
(ask while
asking
to ask
although)asking
such
simplicity
stretches
into a more
difficult
understanding
in the night
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Date Submitted: Aug 20, 2008 (02:28 AM)
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  Disoriented Di...
08/22/08 (01:52 AM) 
THIS WAS BEAUTIFULLY done...sigh..i cant tell you how much i love this....a fve also

  One
08/22/08 (01:10 AM) 
This is genius....this title had me thinking of ready for the world songs...you know the one I mean and...but anywayz......this shit was ingenious...and it seems so complex but yet just rolls out my mouth so smoothly when I say it aloud...Imma fave this....the poem overall is dope but then the pause in the middle..."(can you love a man with scars like treasure maps) "...loved it

  Isis sun
08/20/08 (08:08 PM) 
Resounding yes....it takes a strong mind to calculate when to say yes, when to embrace the unknown, and when to step out into the rain and engage in the most passionate, confirmatory kiss that would seal any unsurety...beautiful proposition my friend...

  The Poet Prin...
08/20/08 (11:59 AM) 
I had to read this a few times to understand this i dont think it cliked for me but i like the rythum none the less

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