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"Can We Talk"
  by Pete Alma


Can We Talk

All night I watched as you slept
I even wept a few times
Knowing I might not be on your mind
However, as you stretch, with eyes half opened
I’m hoping you look my way
Just a simple “hey” will make my day
But you never acknowledge me
As you rush to the bathroom to pee
I hush as I await the flush
With a slight blush on my face
Preparing my space for you and me to meet
We can be discreet
That’s cool
I would like to meet again in the afternoon
Nevertheless, I’m waiting in anticipation
I hear sounds of changing television stations
I’m pacing because there are some things I need to share
But it appears you don’t care
Now your day is quite busy and this I know
But I have a few things to as well
Like causing it to rain, illuminating the sun and prompting the grass to grow
Nevertheless, none of those things come before you
This is the true
I can’t wait for the day to make all things new
But we really need to talk
There’s so much I need to say
Are you really that busy that you can’t make time to pray

I Love You: Unquestionably

Give Me Jesus - Jeremy Camp
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Date Submitted: Jun 30, 2008 (11:29 PM)
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  Teen♥Mom
10/17/08 (09:59 AM) 
This one I had to read twice just for satisfaction very good! I feel your emotion your pain your desire and I hope one day they look your way and say hey! ten starz!

  JuztBe
08/25/08 (04:56 PM) 
this one pulled at my heart stings i think im in love with your pen!! "I’m pacing because there are some things I need to share But it appears you don’t care Now your day is quite busy and this I know But I have a few things to as well Like causing it to rain, illuminating the sun and prompting the grass to grow Nevertheless, none of those things come before you This is the true " oh my goodnes i can just hear the father saying these words to his beloved just wow im so in awe of u right now

  Ordained Misfi...
08/25/08 (03:09 PM) 
Despite his desire to simply spend time with us, we are still guilty of waiting till the midnight hour. This was a great glimpse into what God wants *Snaps*

  Moocy
07/25/08 (01:22 AM) 
This is a good poem.. I loved it, when I got to the middle I could tell where you were going with it and I love it

  A.C.H.
07/24/08 (11:45 PM) 
DAMN! this is so profound! It is making me question whether I have been doing my job as a Christian. This piece is though-provoking and makes us examine and confront the fact that we take many things for granted. A new favorite of mine.

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