"the weight of your words
could be carried away with summer's breeze
and the season grows very hot" loved that stanza right there this was highly creative ma u really did this right here been here so many times so this connected with my emotions excellent scribe
You know Ms. F1... every so often I come across a poem you write that gets me angry, and heres why... I hate erotic poems, so sometimes I wonder why do you invest so much time on Erotic poems when you are so gifted to write pieces like this... pieces that gets to me as like, DAMN, fuck me if I haven't felt like that, and it's those MAN I CAN SO RELATE TO THIS type of pieces that I love when people write... Nice fucking Job!!!
Charge it again to 3,000
Give it 100 more I love you's
and 4 years worth of forgiveness
CLEAR!
and
still...
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Charge it again to 3,000
Give it 100 more I love you's
and 4 years worth of forgiveness
CLEAR!
and
still...
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<-------- oooooooooh BENDA ok ...been in your shoes as of recently...and I know what it feels like....and I don't want to mess up this piece with a long ass comment but this is beautifullu painfully TRUE because most men and women are hear when the one they LOVED....(OMG that word) the one they LOVED changes...and you juss don't knwo where to start....I love this BENDA...a fav. [-]collapse