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"Can This be Saved..."
  by *F1* BROWN


Here I am taken in your breath

---^---^-------^-------

and yet
I'm being sufficated

-----^-----^---^---------^------
I can no longer fill my lungs with your lies
for suvival -----^-----^-----

Hoping to resustitate this relationship
with clamps charged with
what could have been
--------^-
CLEAR!

Charge to 2,000!
Good memories, get in here stacked!

CLEAR!


_________________________________________________________


Just Be A Man About It Toni Braxton - Toni Braxton



I never knew
one day
your kisses would feel like razors going across my lips

...that the moistness
being traded by our tongues
would one day
taste so bitter

Like the after taste of TAB

as if our love was on a diet
we felt less and less

and lost so much

the weight of your words
could be carried away with summer's breeze
and the season grows very hot

What hurts me
Is you wanting to leave
but that pain will heal once more

but what kills me
is you not wanting to stay

and I cannot come back from that

CLEAR!

Charge it again to 3,000
Give it 100 more I love you's
and 4 years worth of forgiveness

CLEAR!

and

still...

___________________________________________

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Date Submitted: Nov 26, 2008 (04:32 AM)
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  JuztBe
12/09/08 (04:40 PM) 
"the weight of your words could be carried away with summer's breeze and the season grows very hot" loved that stanza right there this was highly creative ma u really did this right here been here so many times so this connected with my emotions excellent scribe

  boricuashorty6...
11/30/08 (08:18 PM) 
omg! im in love with this poem! its one of my favorites keep up the good work 10 starts n im adding this to my favorite poem list

  **HOLLA**
11/27/08 (09:18 AM) 
You know Ms. F1... every so often I come across a poem you write that gets me angry, and heres why... I hate erotic poems, so sometimes I wonder why do you invest so much time on Erotic poems when you are so gifted to write pieces like this... pieces that gets to me as like, DAMN, fuck me if I haven't felt like that, and it's those MAN I CAN SO RELATE TO THIS type of pieces that I love when people write... Nice fucking Job!!!

  ~Unpredictable...
11/27/08 (01:45 AM) 
Charge it again to 3,000 Give it 100 more I love you's and 4 years worth of forgiveness CLEAR! and still... _____________________________ ...
[+]more

  MizzJess09
11/26/08 (01:14 PM) 
dis is so sad but i feel the pain. nice write.

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