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"Can I Offer You Some Cunnilingus?"
  by jdbrown
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Can I give you some head? by F1


Can you lay down
So I can go down
And navigate my way downtown
So I can sip on you like some Crown

Taking you down memory lane
When has a dude offered you this good brain
Got your body feeling something you can't explain
Can I offer you some cunnilingus??

I'd love to sample some of your cream
I hear it's the queen supreme
My tongue is relaxing like a dream

Clitoris is stiff like a nipple
Even before I make my tongue ripple
Can I offer you some cunnilingus??

Just let me know how deep
You want my tongue to seek
And it will make your soul weep

Oozing with undeniable pleasure
I wish to taste your sacred treasure
Can I offer you some cunnilingus??

My tongue can nest in your hall
Knocking down your four walls
And hibernate through the nightfall
With your permission, it's your call
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Date Submitted: Jul 27, 2008 (08:34 PM)
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  Complicated
08/24/08 (05:24 PM) 
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL ITS SO GOOD DAT ITS FUNNIE

  Dana Dane
08/20/08 (09:30 AM) 
Ummmm........ wow! Hmmmm.... yes sir you can! lol Great write papi! Very vivid.

  BxGrL
08/20/08 (06:55 AM) 
Wow......I can definitely see it. Keep the mind going and the pen flowin.

  *Miss Toya*
08/09/08 (02:13 PM) 
Um...Yeah...No Need To Ask...

  XPERIENCE
08/02/08 (05:57 PM) 
yes u can offer me some lol...Im with it.. LMAO... u talkin bout me being XXX... hmmm.. thats all imma say about that...

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