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"Can I..."
  by Iaintgot1


Can I…

Touch your hand and try to make you feel what I feel.
Let me try to reconnect with you, so that we may feel what we once felt.
Let us have what we once had.

Can I touch your face and try to make you remember the tender moments that
We use to have together. When our hearts used to beat as one.
You were me. And I was you. We had a love so beautiful and oh so true.
Can I trace your lips and try to make you see that your lips were made for me and only me.
For when we kiss it is a natural thing. And it feels oh so right.

Can I look into your eyes and make you see that us two were in perfect harmony
As a WE? Darling you and I? You and me?
Can I lay across your chest and listen as you breathe in and out? Out and in?
Our breathing blends together as one. For this feeling deep down within is so strong
That I don’t know where I begin and you end!

Can I breathe in your scent and bring back the memories of myself buried in your arms?
Mesmerized by your tender loving charms.
Can you tickle me gently? Make me smile? Like a child?

Can you kiss my forehead? Squeeze my hand? Tell me that you’re my protector, my MAN?
Can you hold me so tight that I drown in your embrace? Can you touch me softly, that it makes my heart Race? Can I? Can you? Undo what has been done?
Was I just another girl? A quick moment of fun?

You tried to hardened your heart, but you fell for me instead. Now we’re both confused, for it is by love that we have been led.

You just a player wanting a one night stand. And I just a lonely girl looking for a man. But you let others convince you to leave my side. And I too afraid to fight for myself laid back and cried.
So now our love has ceased to be. No you and I. You and me. No WE.

Though you did me wrong, I still think about you day after day. We had a love so real so true, how did we end up this way!?

Sometimes your eye catches mine and I hear you silently calling my name. But you and I know that we can never ever be the same. Can you? Can I? Ever deny the power of you and I?

Now that your gone I don’t know what to do. I long to hear you say those three beautiful words:
“I love you.” though you gave me much love. You’ve given me even more hurt.
Can I forgive you? Can I?
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Date Submitted: Mar 01, 2008 (02:01 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 11/15/08 (06:16 PM)
Author: Blood Rose
Poem Title: y do we

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comment icon  COMMENTS (59)
  A.C.H.
01/02/09 (04:43 PM) 
I love the heartfelt emotion that you have poured into your every words. This is definitely a beautiful write. Much luv from one outstanding poet to another. - "the inspired one" a.k.a. Allen Christopher Harding

  G3n3sIz
12/16/08 (11:41 PM) 
beautiful!!!!!!!!!

  Lozzodoodle
12/16/08 (03:14 PM) 
very thoughful and questioning, taking in all those aspects of love, even if it may hurt. beautiful. 10*

  yonnababesz
12/16/08 (03:11 PM) 
GIRL THIS POEM IS EXACTLY WHAT I BEEN TRYIN TO PUT INTO ORDS FOR THE LONGEST....YOUR A REALLY GOOD WRITER

  Palliative Poe...
12/16/08 (03:10 PM) 
.wow this was really good .beautifully stated beleive it or not i needed this cuz im goin thru it im happy i read it cuz im feelin alot betta but this was official !

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