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"Can I go deep?!?!"
  by Kat Nicole


can i go deep, deep, deep
into you if only for a moment.
can i dive into that opening that holds all your pleasures.
can i stop from my downward engulf
for a second to gaze upon your essence.
can i inhale the smells of your verbal climax...
im asking can i touch your internal makeup
so i become your motion movie picture of a past past.
i mean im just wondering just how deep you will let me go...

you see this is about my craving for more.
about my physical lust for more.
its about our connection on planes
where clouds meet stars and men walk on mars.
this isnt an earthly endeavor.
its more like a comprehensive uncharted universal territory.

thats where i want us to flee.
lets hold hearts in hands
and skip off to thee line where thee sunrise intersects thee land.
can we go deep, deep, deeper into each other.
so far that where you start
and I end become just a mixture of shades of brown skin.
so beautiful crafted to tell the journey we just spiritually created.

its all directed for you.
and spoke through me.
sang in thee [sweetest] melody of gratification.
for this script even deaf ears hear and blind eyes see.
so maybe this depth is something i cant describe.
i want to submerge myself into captivity.
alone with just my thoughts and your feelings.

so please lady allow me to....

get deep.
a little deeper
dayuummmm oh just a little deeper

into what makes you...you. and me...me.
beyond the normal sights but deep within your psyche.
where emotions meet veins.
and [blood] pumps from hearts.
where your fears and pains starts.
your goals and dreams fancy.
your past, present and future reside.
your hidden_emotions and invisible-pains manifest. ... .....

that is where im trying to begin with you.
again and again and s l o w l y (i wanna take it s l o w l y) again.

so ill ask once more....







can i go deep, deep, deep?
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Date Submitted: Aug 06, 2008 (09:46 PM)
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  JustChuck
12/27/08 (01:28 AM) 
If you were to put these lyrics to someone I have a feeling that you would get a resounding yes or look of pure bewilderment on their face.

  me-me
12/22/08 (11:45 AM) 
damn this is hot great write 10 stars

  StraY12
12/04/08 (07:35 PM) 
Wow this had some nice imagery in it, made me view this differently then I was supposed to at certain points, but it still had that erotic, desire type feeling to it a very nice write! 10 stars no doubt!

  Sigmatic
11/26/08 (11:52 AM) 
Damn miss lady. I dig this poem. I can honestly say this was one of the better poems that I read this week. My favorite lines were it about our connection on planes where clouds meet stars and men walk on Mars. Damn that dope. Overall ten stars keep it gully.

  King Sa'Ra
10/12/08 (03:51 AM) 
This was deep 4real you did yo thing on this write I give you a 10~, Check out yo boy page.

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