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"Can I fault you?"
  by Kat Nicole


If I loved you knowing it was all in vain...
Can I really fault you for your un-appreciation..

If I willingly gave more than I ever took
Can I really fault you for being selfish..

If I catered to your every need and beckoning call
Can I really fault you for not having thee time to tend to my needs...

If I over powered your give of 20% to my give of 120%..
Can I really fault you for saying I seemed drained..

Can I really fault you for any of our failures? Our downfalls? Our break-ups?

When it was I who stayed in thee very lopsided relationship I helped create. It was I who took less and gave more. And I praised myself for maintaining my position no matter how weakened by the lack of reciprocation I received. It was all in thee name of...

Thee name of..

I proclaimed.....thee name of

L0Ve......but she said "girl, all l0Ve isn't healthy but I do l0Ve you"... I replied "and I l0Ve you too"....
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Date Submitted: Aug 06, 2008 (10:26 PM)
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  Syndel
08/16/08 (01:49 PM) 
see I am going to co-sign this one all love is not healthy the write is deep and I def feel the charge in looking for what feels good but is not always good nice drop

  Ms. Sincerious
08/15/08 (11:18 AM) 
ooh.. girl this one sent chills up my spine.. only because this reflected so much truth..actually reminds in essence of the emotions and thoughts I had been feeling when I wrote FUCK SECOND CHANCES... nicely nicely scribed

  chocolaetreat
08/10/08 (02:48 PM) 
Great Write...Lovely Write!

  Bryan Aarmon
08/07/08 (02:27 PM) 
nice recollection of a one-sided live. Pray that it wasn't you on the short end, but if it was, you have my sympathy

  B. Rose
08/06/08 (11:46 PM) 
So beautiful yo... I love this right here...

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