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"Call Me Greedy"
  by Mrs.Conceited
  - This Poem is a response to the poem k!NG CAN'T WAIT TO EAT !T by KINGLO


Call me greedy, but I want to have my cake and eat it too,
after I eat all of mine I want to half yours with you.

Okay square biz, I guess you can say I'm a bit greedy,
I want a man to love,cherish honor and tell me that he need me.

I want him to be fly, his swagg should be flawless,
cuz if not he's like a lion with no use, his as is pawless.

See it aint all about looks to me, but it don't hurt if he fine,
I want my man to claim me, but he also let these chickens know that he's taken, he's mine.

I want him to buy me nice things, but not subsitute that for love,
I want us to have a union that was blessed from up above.

I want him to be hood, but intelligent too,
I want that Usher and A.Keys type love in that song "My Boo".

I want to love him for him and for him to do the same,
and if I gain a little weight I want him not to be ashamed.

I want us to remain friends like when we first met,
I want our love to last nullifying all placed bets.

I want him to love what he wakes up to as well as what he lays down to at night,
I want to be able to talk out our problems without yelling, without having to fight.

Maybe I'm greedy, and maybe I'm even dreaming,
but if I could have my cake and eat it too, you couldn't stop my eyes from gleaming.
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Date Submitted: Oct 23, 2008 (11:27 PM)
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  jody krak
11/26/08 (01:12 PM) 
nice write tho shit is crazy i feel you ma 10 starz

  Ryta
10/24/08 (06:55 PM) 
gurl dat waz a beast keep doin u ma.

  KINGLO
10/23/08 (11:32 PM) 
damn ! don't know what 2wo say im speachless damn 2wo thumbs up 10 stars

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