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"Butterfly Whispers"
  by `Scriptixz


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.:Quietus:.







enclosed me within its
wordless abyss
as sorrowful gasps
strickened my venous casket
and tears immersed plies
in inconsolable
•lamentations•



I died today



as anguish incarnate drew razor blades
manically,
ravenously
against crimson tides,
lacerating my already mutilated,
ruptured response



-and as plasmic clots spewed forth from my chest-



I was submerged,
swallowed whole by my grief


______


The disfigured fingers of fate
wound mercilessly
around my throat
merging into casing,
choking,
haggard,
ghastly breaths
as sunlight became •gloom•







.:asphyxiation:.







led the way- a comatosed trance
deep into eventide,
into the seclusion of my retreat



away from questioning eyes



questioning thoughts



and as melancholic melodies
seeped into my pores,
coursing through my agonized,
tormented chambers







my woe became flesh


______


Withdrawing further,
deeper into the lamenting shadows

•••as reflections like mist engulfed my isolation•••







my body rocked with mourning

.:butterfly whispers:.

and I,
with trance like strides
walked down the passages of oblivion



The echo of his voice
ceaselessly
persecuted my mind
•enclosing • me • within•
its deathly lullabies
taunting and shredding







and in the deathly silence of my torment







cyan droplets flooded my solitude





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Date Submitted: Nov 28, 2008 (10:09 PM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (20)
  ComplexConfess...
12/17/08 (02:35 AM) 
I have read this afew times and each time i wish to comment, i realize there isn't much to say. Not a bad thing of course, it's just that this write is so immersed in a ..depth of emotional expression, filled with sorrow and pain, that it would be a farce to interpret it in any form other than the writer's own point-of-view. So i will appreciate this for what it is, a piece that gathers the anguish and agony of a being within its words.. with an aura of such devastation, so enhanced by your word...
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  Poets1stVrse
12/15/08 (08:25 AM) 
eloquently phrased...mos def a luv

  mikeb30
12/12/08 (12:32 AM) 
beautifully written..the soothing music def enhanced what u were trying to convey in ur words...

  The Mad Poet
12/11/08 (05:16 PM) 
Very deep write laced with so much pain...but you flow so smooth it almost makes you forget how sad this write really is...Keep flowing boo...Much love & respect

  Chainz.
12/07/08 (03:30 AM) 
Very deep the word play just amazing the lines and everything makes me think and the images are perfect this writing and expression has gotten me to love your poems even though I've only checked 2 of em out I gotta favorite you as a poet and favorite this poem again 10 stars

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