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"...But Did You Hear What I Said????..."
  by *Miss Toya*


When I told you I loved you, with my mind
And that my every thought, consisted of you
Did you hear what said, without opening my mouth
Did you hear it, even though i zipped my lips for you...

When I told you i loved you, with my heart
And gave it to you, without a second thought
Did you get that...or did it not matter
That i loved unconditionally, flaws and all...

When i told you i loved you, with my body
And gave myself to you exclusively
Did you feel that, even after I said
It's hard for me to let someone enter me

When i told you i loved you, with my pen
My only fucking freedom of expression
Did you read that, Or overlook that
Did you hear me when

I told you i loved you, with my life
When i focused on you, even though tears filled my eyes
Even though shit was fucked up...i never bothered you with that
You don't even know about any of that

Because when I told you, that I loved you
I meant what i said,
I told you the way you wanted me to
Inside my head

But did you hear what I said???????????????
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Date Submitted: Dec 03, 2008 (11:01 AM)
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  Syndel
12/07/08 (05:05 AM) 
I think quiet a few of us women can relate to this write even with lips closed we convey but the million dollar question remains did you hear what I said

  K.A.S. THE LYR...
12/03/08 (08:43 PM) 
"When I told you i loved you, with my heart And gave it to you, without a second thought Did you get that...or did it not matter That i loved unconditionally, flaws and all..." ...Thats real love but some guys will that for granted until its gone....poem nicely expresses things that alot of guys enjoy but unconsciously ignore

  Lyric904Lyfe
12/03/08 (06:32 PM) 
this was straight fiyah, and so deep, and i can relate, i'm not the type to open up etither i gotta fave it and the background was hot

  --->ROXIE<---
12/03/08 (04:07 PM) 
this is something so familiar to my life *sigh*......similar to Arcane...this poem was me and my kids dad all the way....he wasnt listening....

  DaddysGirl
12/03/08 (02:41 PM) 
this was deep... i'm really feelin you right here. actions are supposed to speak louder than words- a very creative angle. there's a balance between hearing the words & being able to feel & know beyond a shadow of a doubt. the image tailor fit this piece. definitely a fave for me. i can relate to feelings involved when you're attempting to continuously SHOW someone how much you care.

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