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"Business Deal Gone Wrong"
  by Ms. Intellectual


Your lies where like the
Small fine print usually
Stated on a fraudulent contract

I signed on the dotted line by the “X”
Not realizing you had a girlfriend
That you claimed was your ex

It was your marketing strategy
That persuaded me to follow
Through with this business deal
But, in the end, it was my heart you would steal

I was left with past due balances & overdraft fees
And, you think I want you back…
Bitch, please

You were my C.E.O
Turns out you were nothing, but a hoe
Undisclosed accounts
That I knew nothing about
You put everything in my name
Now everyone is mad at me
Like I’m the one to blame

You’re the one with the debt
Cashing hot checks for sex
Got collectors calling me
Asking…Where’s the check?

I always wonder why I was on a fixed income
I just couldn’t figure out…
Why you couldn’t make me cum?

I received no cash-back allowance or refund
Just heartache, which is no fun
Happiness was suppose to be guaranteed
But now I’m left with legal fees

I have no choice,
But to hand you the pink slip
Because nigga you a trip

You were not qualified for this position
When there are others wishing to be in yo position
Even though I might be suffering from a recession
There’s always an end to this depression

It was the unprofessional impression you left on me
I’m a certified woman, you see
And, unlicensed bitches just ain’t for me
I believe this dispute has come to an end
And according to karma next time I’ll win

I won’t beg for lost compensation
Not even a apology or yo sorry ass conversation
Next time ill amend any future negotiations
Cause I don’t have time for judicious complications

I want you to become acquainted with the problems you cause me
Because this is a Business deal gone wrong
And fortunately, it didn’t last for long
But, remember nigga you was the one who was wrong…
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Date Submitted: Aug 06, 2008 (09:23 PM)
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  cookedcoke02
08/16/08 (07:28 PM) 
DTA NIKKA RTIGHT THERE DEF GOT SUM BAD CREDIT!!!!!!! AMAZING WRITE ONCE AGAIN! WORD PLAY IS FCKIN OFF DA CHARTSZ!!! LEAVIN ME SPEECHLESS! ANOTHER TEN STARSZ PLUS!! AND MOS DEF A FAV.!!! GREAT JOB KEEP EM COMIN!!!!

  LAYDIE JAI
08/11/08 (01:18 PM) 
i like this one...seems almost as if you wrote this in regards to the situation i just got out of....this was hott...keep it up...much luv

  chellebelle
08/08/08 (02:54 AM) 
this was an amazing piece. I loved your unique spin on love.

  lali
08/08/08 (01:51 AM) 
i really enjoyed this poem it sounds like a previous experience it was so familiar "great!"

  fatback
08/08/08 (01:46 AM) 
you and metaphors is like bush and gas yall stay in da spotlight lol {damn im dumb} keep flowin

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