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"BUS STOP BOI"
  by Steel94
  - This Poem is a response to the poem The Bus Stop Girl by TonySouthern


sittin on the curb
waitin for the bus to arive
his momma cussed out the door
but he knew he was wrong
and couldn't explain the tears in his eyes
tryna be a man
but can swallow his pride
he neva hustled on the corna
neva carried a gat
but he had a smart mouth
so it kept his mom on his back
little buss stop boy
tryna pull hisself togetha before the bus come
tryna stop tha pain
but at this rate
he gonna have gray hairs
before he turn sixtain
i say little bus stop boy it'll be alright
just keep ya head up
cause u a soulja
every thing gonna be just fine

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Date Submitted: Aug 23, 2008 (10:21 AM)
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  touchdapearl2
09/20/08 (03:57 PM) 
im reading this piece for the second time and cant believe you didnt get more comments this piece was on point and off the chain

  Twinkle93
09/08/08 (09:35 PM) 
this got me thinkin. and i love this poem. you should seriously become a writer.

  10:53
08/23/08 (08:51 PM) 
nice write

  Juicy1on1
08/23/08 (01:17 PM) 
Nice response We all go through things that others may not realize.

  touchdapearl2
08/23/08 (10:53 AM) 
Damn so youngin might just need to hear,sometimes you need a keep ya head up when times are hard,fiya write

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