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"Burning Desire"
  by Riolicious


Burning Desire
~Rio Strickland~


Y-our eyes speak words that
O-nly my eyes can see
U-nderneath your clothes I can see your fire rising


L-ittle do you know that I have something to keep your fire burning and
I-f you give me a chance, I promise I’ll make you hot
G-o ahead and touch my wick and let your fire ignite my body
H-ow much can u handle before it gets too hot
T-ry to make me sweat and find all my spots


M-y turn to be the magician let me swallow your flames
Y-ou better watch out, cuz my fire can be hard to tame


F-eel this heat baby, and let it rush over your body
I-‘ll promise not to burn you, but u gotta keep it naughty
R-oll out the hose, turn on the water, and make it rain, cuz its time to
E-xtenguish this fire, cuz I don’t think u can hang
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Date Submitted: Oct 27, 2008 (01:25 PM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (8)
  cocoadiva
11/01/08 (07:07 PM) 
i loved the flow of the piece from beginning to end.... the reference points were amazing...

  foremanlin
10/28/08 (05:44 AM) 
this is a very good acrostic, first one I have read too, perfect I like the way it flows.

  Freddy
10/27/08 (04:28 PM) 
good jpb homey well delivereed 10

  MissSexyPussy
10/27/08 (04:23 PM) 
Damn daddy dis is sexy. and u did your thang on dis if i could i would give u 20 but i cant so will just give u 10 starz.

  Queen Campbell
10/27/08 (03:43 PM) 
OMG So sexy! I love the candle and fire references and the flow is nice. Keep that fire burning babes! An instant 10 stars. You did your thing. Bless.

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