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"Build a Bear"
  by Jody


*this is my "reject" piece from the Xperience concept challenge... lol, I forgot my topic when I wrote this initial piece(gangsta teddy bears in tights) And just wrote teddy bear in tights... lmao.... this is that piece...


Empty casing
Flat without you
I wait
To be selected
In this glass fishbowl
For a pair of hands from love’s embrace
To caress my listless state and bring me up
From a heartless life
A seed in dire need of water
And then one day
I feel the grooves from your palm
And the skies open up
I’m reached for
Me

And like rose, I grow
Adorning me in white
Laced tights
Almost complete
You make my insides so soft
Whipped cotton
You kiss my heart
Spinning around three times
To make one last wish
“Will You”
I accept
Transforming
In this love
The glass shatters around us both
And fall at our feet like diamonds
Two worlds unlikely
Collide
… fate wrote this script
So the words
They fall effortless from my lips
Reflecting through my button eyes
These will be the words that bind this fairytale forever…
“I do”
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Date Submitted: Dec 05, 2008 (03:38 AM)
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  CUtEBoyYMaNnY
12/22/08 (11:54 PM) 
NICE VERY CREATIVE since u one of the top 10 poet can u read my poems and tell me wat can i work on to get better and hopefully become like you thanxx 4 your time

  11th Wonduh
12/12/08 (04:24 PM) 
beautifully written w/ words so soft and cuddly, lol. seriously, this is a beautiful piece

  Tpoet
12/07/08 (11:06 AM) 
REALLY CE WRITE

  Blakfiya
12/05/08 (01:29 PM) 
hmmmm.....very nice. Nieces and nephews dig that place so I was able to capture the building up in my mind as you wove this tale.

  leezymleezy
12/05/08 (01:23 PM) 
this is amazing....you described so many thoughts...all building up to "i do"....I enjoyed this

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