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"brown eyes ~mans perspective~"
  by Saunsia


Damn... she got some pretty brown eyes,
golden bronze seas that never dry,
crystal amber waves
shine like diamonds...
they liquify
wen tears fall to face
like rain to window panes...
moist like lips, used to kiss
away the pain
intense like the energy
exerted as i slowly drain...
warmth starting at my heart
and ending at my feet
hot like whit fire, the kiss
left burnoing on my cheek
bronze eyes turn green
when they greet the mornin sun
as chocolate brown eyes stare back at her
after love has long been done
and when acid tears have been shed,
for hours upon end
peircing emrald eyes
show a heart that can never mend
rare topaz yellow eyes
show anxiety and fear
shinie like golden sunbeams
like a cat
they slowly peer
through the windows of your soul
unleashing all emotions
as i stare at my dear,
man... she got the prettiest eyes
that change shades
like the leaves
of a mighty maple tree
fallling and drifting in the chilly autumn breeze
i catch chills down my spine
everytime i look
deep within those eyes...
i drift no other guy alive could get this bliss...
cause in your eyes i see beauty
gems, jewels and other precious gifts
of this earth...
only if i stare deep
into those seas of bronze
do i see...
ME
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Date Submitted: Jul 19, 2008 (02:19 PM)
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  H.H. Holloway
07/20/08 (12:41 PM) 
This was sweet in a sense to where I believed you all the way--I did feel that you were sincere and you intended on bringing the reader in through another perspective, as if standing on the opposite side of the street and looking thru the window with a telescope--sweet--HH

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