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"Brown Eyes"
  by JayMoore


looking into her light brown eyes
like gazing apon amber tinted skies
corneas sun shine blinding my mind
of all of lifes lies
worries and strides
so beautiful yet sadening
to see her skies reveal what lies inside
emotions rain down as the heavens begins to cry
staring into her pretty brown eyes
at times i became
hypnotized
sent into a trance
internally mesmerized
at a mere glance
such beauty far beyond its time
divine optical technology like no other
direct contact
sending electro pulses thru out my spine
stimulating veins
causing my vertabraes to shudder
so delicated and afraid
taking her eyes behind clouds and hides
softly i whisper
invite me inside
let me in and spread joy amongst these skies
i want to love you....
and whipe the tears
from your beautiful brown eyes
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Date Submitted: Nov 29, 2008 (03:35 PM)
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  DeeDee8908
11/30/08 (11:27 AM) 
WOW, THE EYES R DEFINETLY THE MOST SOUL REAVEALIN ON OUR BODIES 10+

  A.Renee
11/29/08 (04:16 PM) 
awww. this so beautiful....i love dis, this is ma fav

  Baby Gina
11/29/08 (03:56 PM) 
this has a very sensitive vibe that's full of passion... great write boi boi :]

  Mz. Lyric
11/29/08 (03:38 PM) 
THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL....I WAS REALLY INTO IT WHEN IT ENDED SO I WENT BACK AND READ IT AGAIN, BEAUTIFUL!

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