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"Broken Hearts will Mend"
  by b-y
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Its always me!! by *~§Poetic§~*


We wasting time and energy on people who will one day change
But as you're waiting for them to change and go through seasonal phases
We lock our hearts away in these hard steel cages
Prisoner of love, passion, satisfaction and subtle affection
But as the world turns and we still flipping thru the pages of our life's story,
Our mind, body and soul is full of anger and angst and we become melancholy
We been thru so many heartbreaks, we lost count when we just said "fuck it"
We put our all in making our relationship work really worth it?
It hurt so much we're forced to be taken out of our character
Then our families try to comfort us and give us this big lecture how we
Living life in Silence of the Lambs eating faces of love away like Hannibal Lecter
But realize broken hearts will mend and someone will find the treasure
One who will love you for who you are and and not for fantasy pleasure
But for the ladies for think that every man who has just this one notion
You're right.....but not every one man is the same, some don't entertain
They love their girl or their wife and yes this is real; no need for the games
We need to learn how to love ourselves..but don't get trapped in the system
Because we love ourselves so much that we end up having narcissism
But don't pretend that love itself is at it's end, so I recommend
Stay true to yourself and broken hearts will mend



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Date Submitted: Oct 07, 2008 (07:46 AM)
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  BxGrL
12/24/08 (05:47 AM) 
love this poem.....great response

  Ordained Misfi...
10/08/08 (04:30 PM) 
They most certainly will... we can't try to change people... instead take care of home, and the rest will follow suit

  *~§Poetic§~*
10/07/08 (12:41 PM) 
idk y but it took me reading this a couple of times before i could comment but its true everything you said is true i am eating faces of love daily and as you can tell from going thru my poetry its really not a good relationship between love and me but i'm taking the time to heal and write out all the frustrations but thanks for all the love you've shown it was a nice surprise to see 9 comments this morning much love, Poetic....

  getchamndrite
10/07/08 (08:26 AM) 
loved this response..and words of hope. "living life in Silence of the Lambs eating faces of love away like Hannibal Lecter" where do u get this stuff?? lol love it

  angeleyes1
10/07/08 (07:57 AM) 
very nicely written and a great response very deep words and all so true keep flowing with your words much love

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