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"Broken Hearted"
  by baby girl oo7
  - This Poem is a response to the poem No More Drama by L!L M!ZZ ST@XZ 313


I thought we were like Bonnie & Clyde
But now as I look at you
All I see is Lies
Replaced with your face
Wich is such a disgrace
They say looks are decieving
In your case it was
On the out side
It was as if you could
Do no harm
As if nothing was wrong
But inside
You are all torn
And worn
All it took
Was just a little bit of time
To see who you really were
Just a little bit of lust
Wich got you confused
Had you thinkin it was trust
A little bit of pride
That had you all
Messed up on
The inside
As I stare into
Your dark brown eyes
What I discorvered was that
The things I thought were
Supposed to be the truth
Were nothing but
Disguised lies
Covered with
Deception
And you face
For protection
brandy broken hearted
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Date Submitted: Jul 31, 2008 (07:16 AM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (19)
  ANTHONY231
09/15/08 (10:33 PM) 
Nice

  JayMoore
08/28/08 (11:18 AM) 
wow dat was nice

  D3TR01TPHR3SH ...
08/21/08 (12:30 PM) 
dam ma this showed some mad emmotion and i feel your pain in this poem i can tell you hurtin 10 stars

  yonnie_313
08/19/08 (03:40 PM) 
omg

  L.edwards
08/15/08 (03:29 PM) 
damn i can relate good write

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