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"Broken"
  by Lisa20


Broken into pieces, crush to the mush of hatred.
Pain hurts to much to swallow wondering if I will feel the same way in a hour.
Unbarable feeling, my heart is just peeling.

When words were spoken I couldn't believe what I've just opened. Words that slip his mouth I couldn't believe what was being said now I wish I would have listened to what was being said.

Not a tear can appear cause one glance at you makes me deter. Wish I would have stayed on the other side of the field, maybe my love would have been shield. Don't know what I should do next, all I know is that I want to take back what was given back. Fix the crush that flush my heart away.

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Date Submitted: Aug 20, 2008 (02:48 PM)
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  YuNeek
12/23/08 (11:20 PM) 
"Unbarable feeling, my heart is just peeling" I just love that line 10 stars mama

  Bree Bree
12/15/08 (05:06 PM) 
"wondering if i will feel the same in hour".... gurl that was some realness if i have every read any.

  Ordained Misfi...
12/11/08 (05:13 PM) 
I can relate to the same broken-ness

  Don Lui
10/15/08 (12:02 AM) 
stay strong beautiful

  Fahnesse
08/30/08 (12:38 AM) 
i actually saw broken pieces in my mind! poem was really graceful yet powerful especially saying "unbearable feeling, my heart is just peeling." lovely girl.sometimes we as ladies gotta go thru that to to get a heart finally back together.

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