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"Breathe me"
  by LadyMay16


Eyes shut closed
Letting your breath
Envelope me
In its thick warmth
Allowing me
To feel
The wanting need
Of your words
As they loosely
Fall from lips
So full of
Dialect
To
Make me feel
The melodic flow
Of your
Energy
As it wraps
Around
Me
Kissing the nape
Of my neck
And
Covering nipples
Which peak out
To be carressed
And blessed
Which meet navel
That
Leads down to
Legs which part
And offer
Sweet
Heat
Released as
A sacrifice......
With eyes closed shut
I wanna feel you
Breathe me



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Date Submitted: Nov 19, 2008 (06:22 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 11/20/08 (06:25 PM)
Author: The Mad Poet
Poem Title: Inhaled...

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comment icon  COMMENTS (6)
  Mz. Crucial
12/10/08 (05:38 PM) 
REALLY LIKE THIS ONE...HOT!!

  11th Wonduh
11/21/08 (10:38 AM) 
the makings of an intimate moment unfolding w/ sensuous word. this write allowed me to freely use my imagination and envisioning the act as it unfolds

  The Mad Poet
11/20/08 (06:05 PM) 
Another hot write...so much passion in your words...you inspire me to let my pen flow freely...I must respond to this one...Very seductive write...Much love & respect boo

  Moz' Wizdom
11/20/08 (04:14 PM) 
Tasefully elegant and excitement producing...Hottt write!!!! A fav...

  .Always.Catali...
11/19/08 (06:42 PM) 
speechless

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