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"breakfast"
  by Jody
  - This Poem is a response to the poem sun underwater by Group: Creativity Lives


golden sun washes over the earth
as we rise
our late night sand sheets
trickle down our brown skin
we take in
through squinted eyes
the orange shine and smile
and before the light settles
we make love
one more time
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Date Submitted: Nov 25, 2008 (01:55 PM)
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  ~* La Princesa...
12/03/08 (07:54 PM) 
this was a very beautiful piece. ya flow was on point. loved the visual. keep em coming.

  Ordained Misfi...
12/01/08 (05:05 PM) 
This shadows the previous write perfectly...

  RedLoveSong
12/01/08 (01:42 PM) 
Good morning, then...that was a refreshing piece, great description in so few words.

  BlessedOne
11/29/08 (06:02 PM) 
You set a beautiful scene here with the golden sun, sand sheets, and the orange shine. What a way to wake up!

  Tpoet
11/27/08 (01:55 AM) 
I LOVE THIS.. BEAUTIFUL.. GREAT RESPONSE

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