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"breakdown"
  by ash_g


break down
break down
feel my body shakin
now.
had me lost but now
i've found
you ain't shit just
ask around.
made me feel like i
was lifted off
the ground.
but for you lovin me
was underground.
real love i thought
i'd found.
i was bound
to make shit work.
you didn't care your
a jerk.
findin out now i
didn't mean shit.
over me was drugs,
alcohol and stackin
chips.
break down
break down
emotionally i'm
shuttin down
your the king
of bitch dudes
wear that crown.
it's on you that
i look down.
no wonder it's always
false love you have
found.
put you on the spot
who's silent now?
break down
break down
cryin without
a sound.
turn that smile
into a frown.
i'm real dude
ask around.
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Date Submitted: Oct 16, 2008 (09:30 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 10/16/08 (09:50 AM)
Author: Shaboogie
Poem Title: Ask around

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comment icon  COMMENTS (18)
  Wrighter
10/17/08 (08:31 PM) 
(DOPE)- yet another artistic piece thats filled with an abundant of emotions- I felt the hate- and when a writer makes a reader feel thier pain then you know your piece has done its job. GREAT (WONDERFUL) write- xoxo wrighter

  Gwilson
10/17/08 (08:52 AM) 
Damn u go, now i know why i picked u after all. cuz of ur skill and will 2 suceed.

  piffington wri...
10/16/08 (01:41 PM) 
Your the king of bitch, dude wear that crown! Whoeva u talkin bout, u jes crushed him!

  KRA3Y
10/16/08 (01:35 PM) 
really gud

  AR-15
10/16/08 (01:34 PM) 
nice flow with this one.. You got the point across very well, Keep that pen movin.. nice write

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