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"bmore boy"
  by Lara





he gives me all the attention a girl could want
it's not too much, but just enough
He's shows me affection without a single touch
His words are printed on my heart

I heard his voice for the first time today
I'm still feeling those butterflies,
can't make them go away...
He came to save me from the hurt and the pain
came to rescue me, and pull from the rain
Like a fairy tale it seems...

A whole new world
Where prince charming flies on a magic carpet to save his princess
from the misery she's in... he holds her hand as they search for a better day...
It's already getting better

A real life fantasy, that's what it is...
i just hope he doesnt leave my life like others did.
I see feelings grow on both ends
but will it last?
This has only just begun, But time will tell...
just waiting now... for my happy ending

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Date Submitted: May 11, 2008 (12:12 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (2)
Date: 06/20/08 (12:39 PM)
Author: LOC-G
Poem Title: GOOD LUCK CHARM

Date: 05/25/08 (12:21 AM)
Author: KiNg-Go0B3r
Poem Title: CAN I TAKE YOU THERE

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comment icon  COMMENTS (29)
  l0nnieugene
12/07/08 (08:05 PM) 
You are in & of Yourself, without any flight assistance, a magic carpet ride; failing that You need only spread/sprout Your angelic wings 2fly far away from pain. Taken it from me, @YHour young age, You have alot of flying that You'll do, solo or as a tantilizing team -- You & he.

  BoySoDef
12/01/08 (03:19 AM) 
nice word usage...I like your placement as well...nice creativity.

  I Am Real...I ...
09/16/08 (11:32 PM) 
nice i real like this one right here this is one of my fav todate

  Jenesis
08/09/08 (03:45 PM) 
aww this is a sweet one here...its nice that someone gives you the feeling...its like you show that maybe some endings can end like a fairy tale and be happy...great write here...10 starz for this =)

  Tragic
07/23/08 (05:16 PM) 
awww is this like 2 me? lol that was really sweet. whoever this is 2 is a lucky mada

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