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"Bloody Mary"
  by JokerJay


Written By: Jaivon Brown
Bloody Mary
Ever heard the story of Bloody Mary?
It'll turn you into stone
It's so fucking scary
It's about a girl
Who loved being dreary
She thought she was a demon
Sent to slaughter fairies
It's funny that she was named
After the Virgin Mary
Because the bloody one was a slut
She said she knew the Devil
She said his name was fuck

Ever hear the story of Bloody Mary?
She was the harlot
And not our lady luck
A fucked up solution
Like a baby born hairy
Something you don't wanna touch

So did you hear from Bloody Mary?
She was dead in the head
Her sorrows were pretty heavy
Not loved by anybody
She said death was very liberating
Really quite contrary
And light on the body
"I won't feel pain, I will not"
Is what she said
She loved the new nose job
She got from the buck shot
Of the shotgun
Her face fell apart
Like a victim of the shogun

Did you ever hear of Bloody Mary?
You better hold on to grandma
Little deary
What's under your bed
Is worse that freddy
If i was in your shoes
I would of prayed at least
But you won't be slaughtered
No...Just your mother and father
Now you know the legend
Of a girl whose black heart knew no bounds
Whisper her name when you get lonely
And get set as she prepares
To go another round
Bloody Mary...
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Date Submitted: Sep 02, 2008 (02:23 PM)
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  KGgg
12/25/08 (12:19 PM) 
Wow..This was brilliant. i am speechless. i wasnt expecting this coming from you but i am extremely happy that it did. this is different from other poems i have read and i love it.

  shy252
12/22/08 (01:21 PM) 
wow!!!!

  Smirnoff
12/18/08 (09:01 PM) 
I loved this right here I absolutely Love it... It just....it flowed so good And the fact that its based around bloody mary just makes it that much better... And the descriptions....I could just see everything you were writin like it was happenin right infront of me Great, no no Awesome job 10 starz if I could give you 20 I would and Imma make it a fave

  Morgoff
12/17/08 (04:20 PM) 
So so good!

  BROKEN HEART
12/14/08 (10:09 AM) 
this crazy but i like it 10 starz

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