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"bleed out"
  by B3yond R3d3mption


We alwayz have a choice..we are all our minds pilots
Wat can be expected from this man born of violence
Vengence..anger..lonely silence
Wont b held back..breaking free of confinement
I write truth thru my blessing of rhyming
Speaking this light to give sight to the blinded
I call this life..and lifes a part of grinding
Learing..living dying and striving
Got so much on my plate u wud think i need a diet
Quitting aint an option..trust me ive tried it
People think they stronger then u if u seen crying
Ima start a riot..the weak ones hide it

When u fail u just gotta try again
Damn..i know the thought is tiring
But Lifes a war and ya just keep firing
No pity no violins
Died once..and i swear i wont die again
Switch lanes new environment
The old me u aint finding him
Take the chains that held me un binded them
No trouble no sirens
Keep it movin like a tire rim
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Date Submitted: Nov 15, 2008 (07:58 PM)
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  WarmNillaSuga
11/23/08 (05:24 PM) 
U KNOW?! So much truth to this piece...but the words u put down only prove what I ALREADY know...u a SOLDIER bruh! In more ways than ONE! Nice work here nephew.

  Mr. RTJ
11/22/08 (11:31 AM) 
can see the pain of past and determination of preset to future in these words. good stuff. can say "Got so much on my plate u wud think i need a diet" was an eye catcher.

  AR-15
11/17/08 (10:48 AM) 
Nice shit here, bro.. Still bring the deep real pieces of poetry. Keep it coming

  DOMINICANPOET
11/15/08 (10:28 PM) 
Well i'm praying for you i truly am....even tho you never called back your still in my prayers hun....i still love u....ten from me...

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