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"black sheep..."
  by PanthaG


here I am
your strange bird
uneasy chair
swift movements
outside
looking in
that's me
try to get close
blur the lines
go away now
b4
you discover
the real me
concealed...
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Date Submitted: Nov 23, 2008 (09:36 PM)
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  Stoykes
12/06/08 (09:03 PM) 
very interesting. i like it when i gotta read something a few times to be sure that i got it. i like it. it got me thinking about if ppl really do know the real me. hot write ~Stoykes

  BlessedOne
11/24/08 (07:23 PM) 
I don't think that we should be scared, but very cause when we allow people to enter our close circle. Yes, they many discover the real you and love you more.

  Rissa14
11/24/08 (06:46 PM) 
i lovedd this.life is really like that too.real talk on this one. i loved how there is so much power in your words, and despite the length..you screamed pages. ten stars and a favorite..damnn sis..what else can i possibly say?? xoxo ♥Rissa

  The Mad Poet
11/24/08 (04:48 PM) 
Powerful write as usual...so who's crowding your space? Much love

  Syndel
11/24/08 (06:14 AM) 
again pushing someone away calling it protecting yourself hurt is a mutha

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