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"Black ppl cum on"
  by dontnohow


Bucuz we wanna fit in,

you do what you can to please this man,

Way.... back in the day,

they finally said'"yes"

you black ppl can eat with us,

you can can stay,

you our friends,(smile)

soooooo, as black ppl we were pleased,

we started not just shoppin with them,

but,

our stroes themselves started dwindling to an end,

we let our own shops close down,

cuz it was finally alright with them,

we could cum on white only ground,

now now now dont get me wrong,

Intergration was a must

but cum on my black ppl,

cant we own our own stuff?

soooooo,

becuz we wanna fit in,

you do what you can to please this man,

Now in todays socity,

I would have to say,

we still on that,

How can we be down,

I wanna be thet clowns bestest friend,

just here to let you know,

that im a strong black ladie,

with the lord on my side,

and two beautiful babys,

so whom ever you thought id be just by lookin at the color of my skine,

or were id fit in a place u took,

dont judg me,

im much much more,

more then you could ever imagin,

more then I could ever hope,

being born a black woman was what I deservrd,

its made me who I am and who Im goin to be,

becuz we wanna fit in,

you do what you can to please this man,

please ppl dont take any of this wrong,

just wanted to say how black is strong,

also how I love my ppl,

yes yes yes,

I do love others aswell,

Its just I wanna tell my brothas.....

love who you are,

id never forget the black mothers,

your great and Oh so pretty,

stand tall,

and keep being witty,

Cuz we are who you are,(men)

as you are who we are,

please!

wanna fit in with yourself,

do what you can to please the fellow man,

not matter what

happy days..........
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Date Submitted: May 04, 2008 (10:25 PM)
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Date: 09/12/08 (02:03 PM)
Author: junebug17
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  DonPoetiq
11/26/08 (10:22 AM) 
Are you really only 11 years old? Your thought process is well beyond your stated age. Great message, Great words...Great write. I'm really impressed with your vision as an Artist, though you're still so young. Be Blessed young Sister...If you could read my poems "I AM" and "Where Then Can Love Be Found?" I would appreciate it. Thank you little genius!!!

  KEITARO TAJ
11/23/08 (04:33 PM) 
VERY VEEEEEERY PHENOMINAL, WOOOOOOOOOW U SUMMED A YEARS STRUGGLE IN POEM, I LOVE IT

  J.L
10/13/08 (05:57 PM) 
deep,very deep.This is a really powerful write,well worded,well executed,10

  Blood Rose
10/13/08 (02:24 PM) 
Strong as hell....u get ur props from me....10 starz

  danceluv08
09/25/08 (06:44 PM) 
wow kinda similar to one my pieces ..but great minds think alike..lol but te

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