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"~BISCUIT~"
  by Saunsia


hello in there!
hey my buttered
delicious delictable...
wat a surprise...
didnt even remeber creating you...
dont recall perparing,
for somethin so heavenly,
placed in the oven,
waiting for perfection...
sheer enjoyment for years to come,
but now we wait
until your completely ready
to just pop right on out...
what a thought,
my boyfriend and i
cant wait to eat you,
spend time together wit you
shoulda made two!
the greastest thing manifested
a small beigeish yellow
dough ball,
in the comfort of my own
OVEN!!!
overjoyed to kno
blessed wit the knowledge
of your very presence
cant wait to see you grow
into a tannish golden brown
and out you come
ready for the world...
ready for us...
teaching us lessons of discipline
hardwork
patience
and reward...
o the rewards of our actions...
cant wait to get you out of
confindment....
so i wait...
3 months to late,
i let,
my biscuit decay
no longer beige but gray
left out,
no chance to shine
no potential shown
just another dried up lump of calories...
now you lay in dump
not tossed...but flushed!
along with all of our dreams
of how you were supposed to turnout
we would have loved to share you
eat you,
spend sometime....
but i guess this is goodbye
there will be few more
but there will be not a one
quite like my
biscuit......
~~~((R.I.P))~~~
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Date Submitted: Oct 30, 2008 (02:51 PM)
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  DeepThinker7
11/14/08 (03:03 PM) 
Metaphors in this piece draw in the reader and then it starts to fit like a puzzle, piece by piece. Truly a saddening but powerful work indeed!

  MzFyne_N_Bless...
11/14/08 (02:21 PM) 
Aww..this was too sad. Great metaphors and imagery. Im sorry, girl.

  DEEP THOUGHT
11/14/08 (02:06 PM) 
i like

  Loveless21
11/14/08 (01:46 PM) 
sorry hun:(

  Bgirl
11/12/08 (12:54 PM) 
aww sia I feel so sorry4 u..R.I.P my baby niece

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