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"better or worse"
  by DEBOMILLIONZ


For better or worse
Just lines in a verse
That we rehearse
To say I’ll put you first
But I don’t believe that shit
Because the one I’m wit
don’t understand it
Cause a nigga stuck
Down on luck
Money a little low
A ruff patch we all know
But instead of being supportive me
She rather just up and leave be with her family
Because she can’t do it
Like I said I knew it
marriage ha blew it
She wants to go home I guess I’ll let her go
No more stopping her I’m not standing in the door
No more
Its funny
When I have money
Its so great every things chummy
Now my doe
Is low
She’s ready to go
Depressing yeah I know
My back bone is what she suppose to be
But right she’s more like poison to me
So I guess what she need I can’t give
So I will just live
My life
Without my wife
Until I have a women who will stick by me
Because I learned what it means
For better or worse
A choice between the two
Before I didn’t have a clue
Which most will choose better they always do
And leave when shit get worse
I I was better off as being cold blooded
Saying fuck it
the good in me over flooded
With the images of fighting to keep what I lost already
So I’ma be me strong and steady
Soul mate not always easy to find them
But like ne-yo’s song I will have my diamond
So I will no longer rehearse
The verse
For better or worse
I will replace or with and
And I will never let go of the hand
That willing to stand
By me
You see
But Till that day
coldhearted I will stay
Because we choose first
For Better
But fuck you when things are worse
-debomillionz
* this isn't a true poem my wife is with me but i thought i would be good to write*
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Date Submitted: Nov 27, 2008 (06:57 PM)
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  dontnohow
12/10/08 (02:27 PM) 
Most ppl are like that thow.. so gd write.. 10+

  Divine Beauty
12/03/08 (07:52 PM) 
well God bless you n your wife. cuz ur flow on this piece is flow n ur a excellent writer. Real talk. one luv.

  Ms. Smith
11/30/08 (11:59 PM) 
aint that the truth...the majority does not mean what they say when they say those words...any of them for that matter. good write. very honest. as usual.

  Cedez
11/29/08 (03:11 PM) 
this is an outstanding write loved it from beginning to end i totally understand where u comin from but yea i loved it 10 starz and a fav

  Image
11/29/08 (01:41 AM) 
I love the last line of this. This was a really good and I understand where your coming from. Two people in a relationship with two completely different intentions.

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