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"BEING WITHOUT YOU"
  by yoggypooh
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Because of you by Complicated


BEING WITHOUT YOU

IS LIKE AN ABANDONED CHILD

LOST IN LIFE WITHOUT A NAME!!!
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Date Submitted: Aug 19, 2008 (10:20 AM)
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  ephemeral
08/19/08 (11:49 PM) 
Very well stated. I can feel that completely... Lost without a sense of self. Perfectly expressed!

  John0323
08/19/08 (10:38 AM) 
short[like a haiku is supposed to be i know], but very much to the point. alot is said in a lil words, and that is the art of the haiku. very nice job =]]

  angeleyes1
08/19/08 (10:37 AM) 
very nicely written and so deep words with this one keep flowing much love

  2Smoove
08/19/08 (10:36 AM) 
this is a great metaphor....it shows true feelings and deep love...it has to be to feel abandoned!!! nice one!!

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