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"BEING WITHOUT YOU"
by yoggypooh
- This Poem is a response to the poem
Because of you
by
Complicated
BEING WITHOUT YOU
IS LIKE AN ABANDONED CHILD
LOST IN LIFE WITHOUT A NAME!!!
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Aug 19, 2008 (10:20 AM)
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COMMENTS (4)
ephemeral
08/19/08 (11:49 PM)
Very well stated. I can feel that completely... Lost without a sense of self. Perfectly expressed!
John0323
08/19/08 (10:38 AM)
short[like a haiku is supposed to be i know], but very much to the point. alot is said in a lil words, and that is the art of the haiku. very nice job =]]
angeleyes1
08/19/08 (10:37 AM)
very nicely written and so deep words with this one keep flowing much love
2Smoove
08/19/08 (10:36 AM)
this is a great metaphor....it shows true feelings and deep love...it has to be to feel abandoned!!! nice one!!
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