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"Beginner's Love"
  by BxGrL


Love so innocent
Love so pure
That is beginner's love

Here is my pin
Or better yet, here is my ring
Along the swings
I got that first kiss
The feeling that comes from holding hands
Hoping those butterflies never end
That's beginner's love

Hoping to grow old
Our bodies did join
Representing the bond
That comes from that newest love
Wanting to prove the mind
This love can conquer the test of time
That's beginner's love

He showed me his love
Through the letters they showed
Distance meant nothing
For our love is strong, i thought it was something
How much I was deceived
Fewer were the letters i received
Longing to be with him
A call i put out for him
Longing to hear his voice
Wanting for it to bring me joy
That's what I wanted from love

I was betrayed by the sounds
That I heard in the background
And she was all I needed to hear
For the end is coming near

.......................... to be continued

Suicide letter is born
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Date Submitted: Dec 01, 2008 (06:24 AM)
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  11th Wonduh
12/18/08 (09:27 PM) 
intimately sweet and beautiful, and then hit the reader w/ a cliffhanger, a hard one at that. very enjoyable read

  Miko
12/14/08 (12:14 AM) 
greeeeeeaaaat!

  BoySoDef
12/05/08 (03:37 PM) 
yo bx...great write..

  MR. BYRD
12/04/08 (01:23 AM) 
damn Bx...this was a very strong heartful write....i don't know what to say on this one really but amazing..10

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