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"beauty"
  by yonnie_313


she is beautiful,so very beautiful
just like a winters shining landscape
as delicate as the petals of a daisy
and as freely as an eagle soaring agaist the blue sky's

Her eyes are as mysterious as the calm sea
everything about her is so very precious
more precious than all the gems in the world
her soul is the essence of the sky and earth
her feelings are a volcano that is yet to exlplode
her smile is the amile of lost innocence.

pain vibrates deep inside of her gentle heart
a lock shuts in the disturbed thoughts of her mind
a mind with as many roads as the world has
i look at her and i see pure truth
like looking at a calm night sky
millions of stars twinkle with her

and i would give up all the things wich i think are pretty
if only i can hold her beauty within me
for she is everthing in this world
and i have found a world in her
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Date Submitted: Aug 22, 2008 (10:28 AM)
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  poetic_ma18
09/04/08 (09:49 PM) 
HEY WUTZ GUD I TRUELY LIKE THIS POEM. IT SPEAKES FOR IT SELF. IT VERY DEEP. I LOVE IT! KEEP WRITTIN IIGHT ..LATA

  L!L M!ZZ ST@XZ...
08/22/08 (10:47 AM) 
man i am lovin this poem i am feelin tha vibe to it seems like you really like this special lady who u met and the words says it all nice work poet 10 strs

  M1SS1PP1 R0CKS...
08/22/08 (10:44 AM) 
uh oh lol i see it clearly now u got ya eye on a special lady thats cool i like tha word choice and flow in this write good show of emmotions and good way 2 exspre yourself

  baby girl oo7
08/22/08 (10:40 AM) 
awww *blushing* this poem was sooooo sweet like 4 real omg i am shocked and impressed even more with your wordchoice and flow it seems like you gettin better nad better i am going to respond to this mos def and 10 from me with a fav

  D3TR01TPHR3SH ...
08/22/08 (10:36 AM) 
lol aww shit man i like it 4 real seems like this lady got u all on cloud 9 love iz in tha air

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