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"Beautiful [Ones]"
  by .Candice.(Rolls Dolo)


Beautiful...
as new beginnings
are found within a wide smile
blooming across your face

Like...

first kiss tingles
taking over
mind, body
& soul
inducing labor
of first love
within thoughts
tied into knots
over brooms of forever

...we

jump...


With...

hands clasping hearts
palming tomorrow's
reciting good mornings
before we wake
from dreams
no longer being just that


...dreams

We

no longer
sleep...

nestled next to possibilities
of beauty being beheld
within eyes of beholders

we
have
became...

holders
of beauty
giving much more
within every
glance, kiss
& embrace
knowing that each other
are
beautiful

ones...



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Date Submitted: Nov 12, 2008 (08:25 PM)
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  BoySoDef
11/27/08 (04:59 PM) 
yo nice write

  LAB **Ms. Cool...
11/25/08 (08:41 AM) 
hands clasping hearts palming tomorrow's reciting good mornings before we wake from dreams no longer being just that..yes.

  Gifted Pen
11/15/08 (12:37 AM) 
i love how the ideas and words merge together like waters flowing together in such peace and harmony with elegance. you are a master with that pen. but what i liked about the subject matter is that is was such an accurate display of young love and the beginning of.

  mindigoblue
11/14/08 (07:45 PM) 
oh wow...I thought momentarily to quote one passage but having reached then end I find that it would certainly do an injusteice to the piece as a whole to wuote on ly part. This is yet another lovely undertaking. I see hope and light and life being lived in lovely ways here...wonderful

  H.H. Holloway
11/12/08 (09:38 PM) 
Thinking I was gonna get Prince (because of the title) and I ended up getting Mary--Sweet Butterflies, nonetheless--Bravo, doll!

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