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"Beautiful on The Surface"
  by Chocolate City


you will find the right girl for you.
there is no such thing.
did god create perfect.?
beauty that lies within is ugly on the surface.

a second doubt will always occur.
whether its within you or her.
your instincts can guide you right or wrong.
your thoughts can leave you loved or hurt.
only if you let it.

so dont forget it.
whatever you do.
dont regret it.

she can make you sad the same way she made you happy.
your emotions are unpredictable.
so whatever happens.
be prepared. dont be scared.
because love and pain. is all right here.

the right one for me. there is no such thing.
but i can live with imperfect. as long as your beautiful on the inside.
as well as the surface.
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Date Submitted: Jul 30, 2008 (11:56 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 07/31/08 (12:47 AM)
Author: leezymleezy
Poem Title: A Reflection Of Your...

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  lisaloveslyric...
08/14/08 (08:42 PM) 
this poem makes me wanna fly to cali and sing to you cuz how long have i waited for a man to admit that all the physical shit will one day disappear and after that only the inside will be there. so thankyou and 1 million starz

  Nilla
08/14/08 (02:54 PM) 
i fully believe that true, genuine beauty comes from the outside. i mean, i would fux with a tore up chick with a bangin' personality before i'd fux with a bad bitch with a stank ass attitude. nicely scribed.

  acknight
08/11/08 (02:30 AM) 
love it

  Thatopmodel06
08/02/08 (05:05 AM) 
AWWWWWW....

  angeleyes1
07/31/08 (07:38 PM) 
very beautiful write and great message as well I agree keep flowing with your pen much love

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