as I cruised through
people eating soul food
drinking rum and
coke and Kahlua and
listening to old school
while my daughter
rocked steady
making me smile
…same hustle
(and the beat goes on)
you know I had to
show her how we did it
grabbing my waistband
and rocking side to side
with the little stutter step
had her and her friends laughing
while they gathered ‘round
watching us kin folk get down
till we broke into
the hustle
and I spun her
making time fly
having fun
working off the Itis
with soul train lines
thinking
it gets no better than this
damn Blak.. do i have to get the bic again?? u fuckin up.. *clicks pen* i loved this!! the background...even tho this was before my time.. it just takes me back to a place where for that moment..life was so carefree.. u can boogie til u cant boogie no damn more!!! *does the snake down the soultrain line* i think i may respond to this.. this was mos def under the right category... made me feel good.... AYE..is that my mama in the back lmaoooo....
made me smile... definitely paints a beautiful picture of family! I think it was brilliant that you open with talking about your moms and then your daughter... going into the generations with dances, that's absolutely beautiful! this is a piece to frame.. lol, very nice and very much enjoyed!
Lol Groovy is the word.. I love it, the background is perfect for this piece.. It makes feel good reading this piece reminisin on old times this reminds me of thoes time... Hot to def Great Write
Your piece gave me a needed smile today. The memories it erected in me were awesome. Thanks for this. Excuse me while I get back in the soultrain line!