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"bE yOUR oWN rELIEF"
  by lisaloveslyrics
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Relive Me... by Snickaz


aLL tHE TIME U SPEND LOOKING
U COULD CREATE A NEW RELEASE
DOESN'T POETRY SOOTHE YOUR SOUL

A KNIGHT IN SHINING ARMOR
NOW YOU KNOW THAT'S JUST UNREAL
BE YOUR OWN RELIEF STOP LIVING IN A FAIRY TALE

WHEN YOU CAN'T FIND A MAN
COMPLIMENT YOURSELF
WHEN YOU CAN'T STAND A MAN
STAND BY YOURSELF

REALIZE YOUR OWN BEAUTY
FULFILL YOUR OWN DREAMS
FUCK ANYONE ELSE
BE YOUR OWN RELIEF
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Date Submitted: Aug 14, 2008 (04:53 AM)
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  lisaloveslyric...
09/10/08 (04:56 AM) 
I really love dis one... it hit da spot.... got me realizing some shit real talk.... lisa girl u did your dang on dis on sis.... yo sis Magean.....MVSU all DAY!!!!

  mOhRiA
08/14/08 (02:44 PM) 
I'm really feelin dis one.....dis is some of ur best work!

  Best Thang Smo...
08/14/08 (02:26 PM) 
damn you really did yo thang on this one right here for real alot of feelings in this 10 starz all day

  biscuit
08/14/08 (01:59 PM) 
IM FEELIN DIS..VERY NICE

  Snickaz
08/14/08 (04:56 AM) 
and i will try to do tht this upcoming year. its senior year and i can't play or cry over who doesn't like me....i gotta try to weed through it and keep mah head i mah books. thank u again...

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