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"Be With You"
  by Juciy


Even though I have to go away
here with you, is where I want to stay
to hold you and to kiss you
5 minutes apart, and I'd already miss you
to just be a phone call away
so many things I want to say
I love you is what I want to hear
because loosing you is what I fear
with you, I feel right at place
no matter how hard I try,
its your face I cant erase
when I go for a day without hearing your voice
I get angry, but thats my choice
and the longer I go without seeing you
my days seem colder and blue
when all I want to do is to be with you
its the one thing I feel is true
I tried to fall out of love plenty of times
but talking to other people felt like a crime
because you still hold my heart
so it refuses to let me part
please try not to break it
because this time around,
I wont make it.
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Date Submitted: Oct 12, 2007 (06:27 PM)
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  cyrux
12/10/07 (07:58 AM) 
juicy. it is touchy,you dont wannalet him go.i like your choice of words and the rymes

  drzprincess
10/13/07 (08:45 PM) 
wow its like u wrote just 4 me ma cuppiecakes left 2 his hometown on 09.26.07 and when i don't hear his voice i get angry and go insane amazin

  Sillybilly
10/13/07 (08:40 PM) 
This one go to work homegirl. This a fave right here, you do good on expressing love.

  sexy.beautiful...
10/13/07 (08:35 PM) 
heartfelt and well written lost of words of how your poem flowed well done

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