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"Be Here."
  by .Candice.Renee.


Arrow Root - MF Doom


It's a Monday
beginning of the week
another day dealing w/
feet to concrete pushing towards
cubicles closed off from the world
below construction drowns out
MF Doom tunes...
you would rather
watch flowers bloom
sniff Esacada perfume from warmed
dark summer skin & embrace a grin
eat beef patties discussing how the world
seem so fucking mundane
& how life as we knew it
has took a change... for the worst
still somehow finding peace in
laying back w/ arms rested at sides
watching clouds slowly roll through the sky
thinking you have all the time in the world
& right here is where we should want to be
here... is where you should be....w/ me


but you're not...



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Date Submitted: Aug 20, 2008 (12:05 AM)
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  typikal_poet
08/20/08 (11:18 PM) 
The start of this poem was something amazing and the ending just as good.

  Change by fait...
08/20/08 (07:12 PM) 
this poem and music calm my mind ima favor this ten stars and thank you for sharing

  *Miss Toya*
08/20/08 (01:47 PM) 
beautifully written...though the last line made me a little sad....but beautifully written nonetheless

  LadyMay16
08/20/08 (10:05 AM) 
floatng on clouds all day would be such a lovely lovely thing to do with him..but he be floating on some crazy ass clouds outta this world..lol...beautiful piece candy cola

  STYLES C.
08/20/08 (09:14 AM) 
Cookie Monster... The things that fall outta your head sometimes... Makes me weak... I swear..

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