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"Battle"
A jDeuce and DOMINICANPOET Collaboration


  jDeuce:

This shit goin be hot
You trying to battle me
Just bring what you got

  DOMINICANPOET:

Well...I can see you....
Losing this battle real soon.....
They say I'm the queen!!!

  jDeuce:

You may be the queen
But the words I spit are king
I'll make your loss STING

  DOMINICANPOET:

Pain....I enjoy that...
So how will you manage it?
It's not that easy...

  jDeuce:

I will tell you how
I spit words that are deep and
Will leave you speechless

  DOMINICANPOET:

Speechless well not me....
Never been that....and i refuse...
to let you beat me

  jDeuce:

Don't let me beat you
I don't wanna hear any . . .
Excuses later

  DOMINICANPOET:

Only losers need
excuses...why would i?
I'm Number 1 boy!!

  jDeuce:

I see you cant count
2 comes after 1 my dear
I am 1, you? 2

And lets get this straight
I've not been a boy for years
Wise beyond my ears . . .

  DOMINICANPOET:

A man???You claiming??
the only man you are is....
DIMPLEZ MAN....thats it....

Throwing two verses?
What happened got alil scared?
or just feel threatened???

  jDeuce:

That first verse was cute
But I don't think you realize
I'm no amateur

I wrote 2 verses
Cuz if you really got skills
You can write 2 too

Oh, but what is this?
A third verse has come about
DP . . . you knocked out!

  DOMINICANPOET:

Knocked out...not even...
You haven't even touched me.....
It's more like wake up

Come out that coma....
Cause you is looking foolish
thinking to hard son

This is cake to me....
Just Like writing a riddle
Ridiculed your ass!!!

  jDeuce:

Ridicule MY ass?
Lol, not quite you see
I'm laughing at you

You think you goin win
Such a thought should be a sin
This battle is mine

Let me break it down
Cuz you seem somewhat puzzled
I win and YOU lose

  DOMINICANPOET:

Losing don't exist...
Not here anyway....give up
I should charge you man.....

Giving you lessons
On how to write properly
Seems to be working....

So where's my money?
Either pay up or suffer....
and i'm not playin

  jDeuce:

I hear you talkin . . .
But if I'm being honest
It don't mean that much

See, I know you tired
So, I'ma give you a break
And if you readin . . .

Hit us up later
Cuz this shit is getting long
No doubt we'll come back . . .

. . . Strong (To Be Continued) . . .
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Date Submitted: Oct 23, 2008 (01:45 AM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (16)
  icnicn2004
11/02/08 (08:30 PM) 
Wow. This is hot...10 stars.

  SiSithaflii3st
10/24/08 (04:25 PM) 
wow... great great battle bangin skillz hard to do a haiku battle but this was awesome :) 10z all around

  volacious
10/24/08 (11:29 AM) 
This is mad hard. comin strong the both of you. i gotta give it up to the king n queen

  J Dog
10/24/08 (08:11 AM) 
damn this is some funny ass shit man. keep it up none of you wanted to give up. 7/10 yeah...ok

  Land Roving
10/23/08 (11:28 PM) 
lol this is wild!!! yall gotta hurry up wit pt 2!! 10'

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