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"Bang Bang Bang"
  by *SaVaGe*


Bang Bang (Feat. Rashad) - Jadakiss

Im around, But I ran away from the site
Cause half these MC blow cock, and the rest clog pipes
Don't feel half these artist have potential
I express the way I feel, so no need keeping it confidential
Ran away from private, just to get in the public
Writings writes, that has no meaning to the subject
Coughing blood, cause my write hurts
Can't smile now a days, but once in awhile you'll see a smirks
Im putting my self out in open fire, but no one can still get a shot
Like tryna plan a plot, that can be stopped
All you can do is give em props,
cause he just doin his job just like a cop
Why everybody acting so tough,
Im ment to happen like new shoes getting scuffed
I pre buffed, just to give more effect
If you don't got a point in your comment, im simply gonna re-ject

Bang Bang Bang
When I write my writes
Its a Bang Bang Bang
I don't know bout you
But we you don't wanna talk
Bang Bang Bang
Its my life I write
Bang Bang Bang
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh


Stop think and Listen
Cause your vision, has to be your decisions
So stay on your mission,
If you feel your the shit simply state it
Don't brag or boast, or even overrate it
Cause you'll get spoiled by SaVaGe, when he out dates it
You have three minds, Yea head, Heart, and DiCK
Follow your heart
cause your head gets confused, and your dick leads you to shit
Some may understand it, others may wonder
Strike harder then a rainy day with thunder
Leave You under, with just a bar
Rotate yourself like you were a car
Get a check up, make sure everything’s straight
Shake Hands with The real
And Nod heads with the fake
Cause Snakes bite
And slowly kill, So just wait
So Think and Hold on to my thoughts
Cause you'll get tired if you run, so just walk
So type the Truth, and Backspace The False
Cause you can easily be told, like ya pulse


Bang Bang
When I write my writes
Its a Bang Bang Bang
I don't know bout you
But we you don't wanna talk
Bang Bang Bang
Its my life I write
Bang Bang Bang
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh



Feel Me Or Back The Fuck Off
Be Easy SaVaGe..
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Date Submitted: Aug 11, 2008 (06:16 PM)
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  ItzBr1tn3yBiit...
10/15/08 (11:07 PM) 
wow... this is ....different...in a good way... deep... hmm. gets u thinkn... 10

  --->ROXIE<---
08/30/08 (12:43 PM) 
DAMN...U WENT OFF....I FEEL U THOUGH....THIS WAS ANOTHER BANGER...U ALWAYS HAVE ILL LINES SWEETIE

  LoyalHeart
08/14/08 (05:24 PM) 
real piece right here man, the flow was just hot and the visual just too damn real, much respect man, always be you

  TRU-IN-DEED
08/12/08 (08:15 AM) 
"Shake hands with the real nod heads with the fake" oh hell to the yes young man! lol that was a dope line fam. This whole shit was dope yo. I'm tryin to tell folks, watch ya selves this young man is comin for ya heads!! lol Dopeness fam. - T.I.D.

  Lil Lexis
08/11/08 (07:35 PM) 
[I won the bet c[=] But serious though.. animosity is the perfect word.. Don't let shit get to you.. i mean the piece is hot... like always and you have some ill lines like always.. I mean i feel you on the topic you're talking about.. Just don't devote so much energy to it and let it get you upset k? =Cause you'll get spoiled by SaVaGe, when he out dates it = that's my fav line =]

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