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"back againist the wall"
  by a fallen angel


Back Up Against The Wall (featuring SAS) - Nicole Wray

like shooting dice
with u , i always crap out
you are breaking what
is all ready broke
when i trying to speak
you never understand
One sided conversions
Due to lost of commutation
As you can't relate
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To why I even try to speak
Enticement fades
As inspiration flees
Getting more back
From a brick wall
At least I know
If I fell it would break my fall
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As translation is misunderstood
Lack of comprehension
Is the fool
I do better listening
To the leaves
At least I can hear
them rustle under my feet
Instead of them failing
to speak
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Like talking to hollow echoes
Bellowing screams of silence
Concrete in their answers
As your love evades me
A possible friendship is gone
as i hear my heartbeat
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I feel the reflections
From the warmth of the sun
shawdows embrace
telling me it wrong
Telling me that your cold heart
Can never show love
as am slowly dying
i feel more love from this wall
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it makes more sense



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Date Submitted: Jul 10, 2008 (12:50 PM)
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  BoySoDef
12/02/08 (03:43 AM) 
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  BoySoDef
12/02/08 (03:43 AM) 
POWERFUL...SIMPLY MESMERIZING.. YOUR GIFT EXTENDS FOR BEYOND 97 PERCENT OF THE STUFF I READ ON HERE...YOU MOST DEF HAVE THE GIFT..

  JokerJay
11/17/08 (05:49 AM) 
even if i commented this poem before. it's too good. i gotta comment again. and rank finally

  Str8teazer201
11/04/08 (03:02 PM) 
the pics are totally coolersz ... im loving the way that you used the words to paint pictures in my heart ... i love it ... omg ... u get a fav ... keep writtin till the pen goes out

  The Mad Poet
10/25/08 (03:25 PM) 
very sad write but I love the pics...keep ya head up mama...the sunshine does show up to wash away the rain & all the pain...much love & respect

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