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"baby your just lost"
  by DEBOMILLIONZ


Lost that what we are right
Allowing stupid shit to keep us down
You smile all day then the next you frown
Telling me your smile was a fake so what is it now
Love With a question mark
Drives us apart
laying side by side cuddled up in the dark
Every other day I shed a Lonly tear
Everytime you say to me you don't want to be here
So who am I wit
What do I get
To go wit
shaking finger tips
Tembling lips
And that beat that my broken heart seem to just skips
I can beg you to stay
Every other day
And just pray
You don't go a stray
And up and walk away
Beautifulsoul
You make me whole
Complete me like lines in connect the dot
Coolant in my system so I'll never run hot
With out you I'm just here
But every hug kiss call email Note I give
Is me fighting for us to live
All I can do I keep putting up a fight
Till you see that light
No matter the cost
Baby your just lost

dedicated to beautifulsoul
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Date Submitted: Nov 05, 2008 (05:35 PM)
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  TwiZted
01/02/09 (07:50 PM) 
yo this is so serious!! i love it ten starz

  J3LLYB3AN
12/11/08 (05:20 PM) 
this is deff a great write and im feeling what your saying here.. keep it up

  Mr. RTJ
12/04/08 (07:50 PM) 
this was very endearing. really poured out the feelings of how someone can make you whole even if they don't see it. this really makes me think of a line, what cause is lost so long as there is one fool to fight for it. good stuff.

  Tracks of my t...
11/14/08 (07:15 PM) 
10 all the way alot of emotion I just love it great job.

  missempress2im...
11/06/08 (11:25 AM) 
Nothing worth havin is easy. THere will be tough times...everyday there is gonna be something new but the strength of love will keep the fight in you both. great write.

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