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"B3AUTiFUL iN DiSGUi$3"
  by ~* La Princesa *~


Everyone's honest
Everyone lies
Everyone's beautiful
but they're in disguise

And Im patient as much
as love is kind
but I'm waiting for--
for a sign

Everyone told me
What to do
Slapped my wrist and
Saw me through

but now I'm out
On my own
independant;
A rolling stone

But I dream of the future
And what it has to hold
I believe that everyone
Has a path to unfold

Love is patient as much
as you are kind
But I'm alright if
The sun still shines

You can hurt me
Bring me down
but my feet stay
On solid ground

I'm not scared
Scared to go
I'll leave faster
than the fallin snow

Just a whisper
In the dark
A lonely name
a lonely heart

But I dream of the future
And what it has to hold
I believe that everyone
Has a path to unfold

I am honest
but I lie
I am beautiful
but in disguise

I'm confident that
I'm insecure
Like everyone else
That came before

I believe that
Nothings a waste
One foot forward
To face the day

Speak so soft
You can't be heard
But I know you
I know your words
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Date Submitted: Nov 21, 2008 (08:16 PM)
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  StraY12
11/25/08 (05:17 PM) 
Wow, this was nice I'm feelin' your perspective with this one, cuz you did your thing, again, " I am honest/but I lie/I am beautiful/but in disguise" it's like I could just keep quotin' errythin' you write, you got so much skill!

  KiNg-Go0B3r
11/24/08 (11:00 PM) 
hmmm ok i seee...nice..i diggs the meanin to this write

  Ordained Misfi...
11/24/08 (10:40 AM) 
I think we're all beauties in disguise... (in our own way)

  mz.i-20
11/23/08 (01:47 PM) 
yo this is hot i give u ten stars anda fav u got sum talent ma keep your pen moving

  Brokenvegtable
11/22/08 (03:25 PM) 
this was a great poem ..... i really enjoyed this ..... not alot said but there was alot of emotion conveyed through them i could feel some hurt in the lines here..... but i also feel that in some points of this poem you could have opened up more and allowed the reader to feel a more personal side of you..... but you held back somewhat ...... i can understand why you might hold back ..... many people that write do hold back ...... sometimes it take a bit of work to open yourself to being able to...
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