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"Ayo, She Killed Her..."
  by Prince of War: King of Peace


* Gun Clicks. Weed Sparks. A Tear Falls... *

* What's Wrong, Breland? *

Ayo, She Killed Her...In the Life I Lead; There aren't very many Rewards...
Oh, Yes. There are Old Chevys & new Fords...Even Hustler of the Year Awards...
But, I'da Rather had My Daughter & a Blue Honda Accord. Damn...

* Thats Crazy, Lil' Dude.. *

I mean...I Bought all this Shit I cudn't even Afford...Talked 2 My Mama...
Even thought of gettin' back right wit The Lord...
I Wud be the Best Daddy in the World...I Was Sure...

* Fuck E'rything *

I Can't Even Find the Heart 2 Wanna Write this anymore...



My Seed...Bre'Lynn Cerena...She wud've Grown 2 be the Vine Climbed outta this hell Hole...

To My Unborn...

I Apologize I won't be there 2 watch U grow...My angel, Res Assure; My father will watch over U...Even in Ur absence, U've taught Me 2 Cherish EVERYTHING I hold Dear 2 Me...Cuz it might not be there when U wake up 2morrow...Its probably Safer up there anyway...Lol! U still gotta Shake it Off, if things get Tuff...Believe Me, He won't Make it that Easy...U gotta Pay sumthin' 4 those Bottomless Mugs of Oreo's...Behave Urself, Lil' Mama. And, Don't ever 4get that Daddy Loves You...On E'rything.

Your Father in Flesh. Brother in Spirit,

Breland Sincere Anderson Whitney
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Date Submitted: Nov 11, 2008 (12:37 PM)
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  Luvlee
12/10/08 (03:26 PM) 
Oh my i'm so sorry for your loss that is one of the most difficult things in this world is too lose someone especially someone that is so close to you and your heart!!! i pray you have peace over this situation and know thats she's resting in a better place now!!! You are an amazing person and father for standing strong even after a piece of your heart has departed!!! Much Love!!!<3Luv

  Nilla
11/16/08 (01:54 AM) 
damn, son. i am soooo sorry that you had to go thru somethin' so tragic, man. my heart goes out to you.

  Datsexichick
11/13/08 (01:07 PM) 
damnn thats deep sorry fo the loss... feel ya pain ten starz n a fav keep ya head up

  T Lyrique
11/13/08 (07:52 AM) 
Damn...i honestly don't know what to say- i cant imagine what you've gon through- just keep God in ya life and keep that head up...dont stop writin...10 :(

  RUBY RED DBL R
11/12/08 (03:21 PM) 
wow that is mad hard to get over i just lost twins about 2 years ago and i know the pain of losing a child, i would never abort any of my children because, thats not me this went really hard and i loved the flow, the letter to your daughter really mad it more emotional... excellent ink

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