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"almost"
  by harley quinn/a fallen angel


Almost Blue - Everything But the Girl
Crying In The Rain Pictures, Images and Photos

Almost...
wasn’t good enough

do you see
I was the fool

almost...
f
a
l
l
I
n
g
for someone like you

almost...
giving you my heart
as I wore it on my sleeve

almost...
giving you a special part
of me

almost...
f
a
l
l
i
n
g
in love with you

while I was a game
it wasn’t fair
the way you played

you took our beginning
to a saddened end

before our reality
could really begin

you almost ...
had me at hello

the way you treated me
like your queen
if you only knew
how much
I wanted to call you my king
till you left me blue

Do you know it was almost...
me and you
crying in the rain Pictures, Images and Photos
crying in the rain Pictures, Images and Photos

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Date Submitted: Nov 18, 2008 (03:42 AM)
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  Deandriah
12/09/08 (09:26 AM) 
THis was truly beautiful. I loved it alot. I can feel you on this one, and see where you coming from.

  Gifted Pen
11/19/08 (01:55 AM) 
Dang, know you tell me. just playing. if this is real, i am sorry you had to go thru this. but this poem is full of passion,love and power. it talks of sad things but it the energy behind it is power, love and passion.

  piss a mofo of...
11/18/08 (10:06 AM) 
*wipes forehead*...i'm glad you were 'almost' taken by this dude and moved on ....now lets put up some pics of me and you so he can know why he WASN'T the one..*winks*....hahahah...

  .Always.Catali...
11/18/08 (09:38 AM) 
you do emotions like few can J....you already know....

  drybaggij
11/18/08 (07:14 AM) 
That song is so friggin sad. The poem is ill. Games are no fun.

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