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"A Mothers Plea"
A Luvlee and Certifiediva Collaboration


  Luvlee:

Babygirl please come sit
Have a talk with your mama for a little bit
I have some things Id like to discuss
Although its a heavy topic dont make a fuss
So I hear your thinking of having sex
Dont be worried about who told me
Child I interceded one of your text
I just want to say I need you to wait
Baby Im telling you first hand sex isnt that great

  Certifiediva:

Mom how dare you violate my privacy
First my phone next will be my diary
Your always wondering why Im hiding things now you see
All my friends talk about sex being good and I know they wouldnt lie to me
Besides you had me at a young age
Grandma didnt lock you down in cageso treat me the same
I have to live my life and learn from mistakes
Drop the topic PLEASE for goodness sakes
Im a young woman now... Ill be okay

  Luvlee:

Girl whatever you do dont take that tone
And i can look where i please i bought that phone
Now i'm telling you this for your own good
I had you young but I was misunderstood
I didnt have nobody telling me not to
So i looked for love with the first dude that called me boo
But you, you have a bright future ahead
But thats not going to happpen if your quick to jump into bed
With a no good scoundrel that just wants a home run
Baby you deserve better then just to be some losers fun

  Certifiediva:

Mom Im not trying to be rude
And I promise I wont end up being someones fool
I learned from you so my life can be corrected
If I decide to.ill use protection
So no babies, STDs or infections
He loves me mama why cant you respect it
He wants more than to just see me naked
Ive grown to be the smart girl you raised
But physically I have your ways
Hes not one of those guys just trying to get laid
Trust me mom I dont want AIDS
Sometimes I think youd be happier if I was gay.

  Luvlee:

Baby please a lesbian is the last thing I want
I'm just afraid I cant even front
But I know your grown now and you've learned from the best
So I have faith that you'll make the right decision
Remember always use protection and consider some birth control
Because I dont want to hear mom I missed my monthly flow
Pick the right man that'll treasure what you have
Please dont become a teenage mom and follow down that path
Although I wish that you would truely consider waiting
Its time I now face the facts my daughter is now into dating and having sex

*sigh*
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Date Submitted: Nov 19, 2008 (10:30 AM)
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  B. Rose
11/21/08 (05:05 PM) 
Well this makes me rexall some of the convos my and moms andlittle sister were having yo... damn it sounded exactly like this except they argues and still didnt agree to disagree at the ed... nice going yalll

  African Queen
11/20/08 (04:52 AM) 
someone had to do this...and you both did a great job with it!!! We have a world full of kids trying to grow up too fast...not enjoying the childhood and going about things the right way...a lot can be learned from this piece...nice work ladies!! Respect!!!

  MzSpoon is bac...
11/19/08 (08:40 PM) 
I liked how this truly seemed like a real conversation that a CONCERNED mother would have with her daughter. It's true that our children are growing up faster nowadays, but the reality is they want everything now, but fail to think about the consequences. This was truly a great collab.

  Ordained Misfi...
11/19/08 (10:40 AM) 
Finally... I've been waiting for this one. I almost thought you two were really mother n daughter... you grasped the characters perfectly... And the moral was well received

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